rayannes life

i really loved it probably cus i relate to it so much but still i really liked: I'm so tired of fighting each day just to see you walk past ...

i really like that i wish i was better at writing poetry like taht but i just cant make it flow...you do perfectly

very nice i liked that but not the "I close my eyes shut, They re-open quickly" part, even though it is small. i like it overall though

thanks for fixing some of those things, it really helps but some things i can explain: i put crash and burn together because they go tegether, they're like a pair, ...